Friday Flash #4! Waiting
Celia
This is actually the beginning of a story idea I’ve been tossing around. Still not sure if it will see the light of day, but at least ya’ll can read the first few hundred words.
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Here I am, sitting in a typical hotel bar. You know the ones. Non-descript curtains line the walls, trying to make patrons feel like they’re in some tropical paradise instead of the local downtown motel. They try to make us forget that tomorrow morning while we’re nursing a hangover that won’t quit, we’ve got to sit through some convention spiel.
I look around the room, taking in those beige tropical curtains and wicker chairs filled with merry drinkers. I feel a little sorry for them. Notice I said little. They have to wake up tomorrow morning to a hangover and I get to wake up to…
Well, as long as this whole thing isn’t a mistake, I’ll wake up a happy woman. That’s why I’m here in this place. I’m hoping that all of the planning and preparation will all be worth while.
The plane tickets, the rental car, the suite in this hotel…they’re all for one purpose. And here I sit.
Watching.
Waiting.
Wondering.
Hoping.
Praying.
And now…now I hope it hadn’t been a mistake. Hope that it all hadn’t been for nothing. I hope that I’m not meeting my death like the cliché dumb blonde that goes down into the basement only to be killed by the axe murderer in every horror flick ever made.
Taking another sip of my apple martini, my liquid courage, my eyes wander to the bar tender wiping down the counter. His eyes wander over my body and I smile. He can look, but touching is reserved for the man I’m meeting.

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November 16th, 2007 at 7:13 am
Good teaser or starter.
November 16th, 2007 at 9:12 am
I love it, but um where’s the rest? Hmmm? lol
November 16th, 2007 at 2:45 pm
I love the premise you’ve set up. It leaves so many possibilities open for discovery. I hope you do continue with it.
November 16th, 2007 at 6:23 pm
It sounds great, I can’t wait to read more….
November 16th, 2007 at 6:40 pm
Add me to the “would keep reading” queue. And, hey, you DO know that teasing invites retribution, right?
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November 16th, 2007 at 6:43 pm
Very cool - I sure hope there will be more someday!
November 16th, 2007 at 8:52 pm
Me LIKEY!!!!!!!
November 16th, 2007 at 9:19 pm
OMG I loooove it!
November 17th, 2007 at 9:26 pm
Is there a 900 number we can call to get the rest of the story?